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Wani: Red Pen

Copyedit? QA pass? Alternate directors cut? All three describe this project.

Cavemanon left a fair amount on the table with Wani. It's a shame. Unimplemented assets, comments on things they wish they did... And while they may have artful writers, the grammar leaves much to be desired in areas.

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Alterations include, but are not limited to:
- Rudimentary proofreading,
- Shored up, reworked, or cut innumerable lines, *
- Patched wonky animations,
- Expanded animation in spots,
- Integration of unused assets where appropriate,
- Swapped cg/bgs out in relevant/contradicting places,
- Implemented dummied out devcode and notes,
- Major rework of soundtrack integration (fill in silent spots that aren't silent for a good reason, reinforce motifs, etc),
- Minor foley work using creative commons licensed stuff,
- Added switch in options to change which background is used on the main menu,
- Minor improvements to gallery (ordering, full unlock if seen epilogue, etc)

...and zillions of other tweaks and fixes. If you want a full changelog, you'll have to read the script files yourself. Every chapter of the novel has been touched, and I've written extensive margin notes.

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* To be clear, this is an unsanctioned fan edit. I have done everything in my power to keep to the soul of the story. Meaning changes exist, but they're mostly limited. There is only one place I feel I truly overreached, and that's in E1 (and even then, the soul is maintained). However, opinions can differ, and I don't know what would be too far for a given reader. Caveat emptor, I suppose.

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Special thanks to JustDeni. They were gracious enough to supply a secondary proofread, which has been integrated into this project.