I understand it is early access, but its way too bland for the price, enemies are just positioned to stall and not to enhance the experience at all. It felt like a Gmod map with horror workshop mods just placed in. Shotgun is useless and most if not all enemies can just be avoid by sprint strafing. The "story" elements are just reading and i just found myself just ignoring them. The maze is just filler and poor game design, stuffing ponies in corners is not fun or thrilling in any way, just annoying. There is no place to loose enemies so it just becomes an instant death when seen. I just said screw it and full sprinted, after having the maze mapped out, and just made it to the end by beating the enemies pathings. If there is actually a full game to release then maybe i will look into it then, but charging for what is basically a 30 min roblox horror map is just stupid. I would suggest playing games similar to that of which you want to make, and getting an idea of how those games flow, understanding why items are place where they are. what make them fun and enjoyable. This can be a promising just needs a good bit of work.

Somethings i would to suggest to enhance the enemies,

-The Earth Ponies have them being blind, being extremely sensitive to sound put them in less numbers. With an investigate and attack script. Allowing players to distract them with sound to free up a pathway. Have them hiding in hard to find areas. Not just stuffed in open area with nowhere to hide or right up hills.
Example being: Have more buildings on the map with them hiding inside of. making the shotgun shell placed in these buildings (and having them scarce) forcing players an interaction if they wish for more ammo. During their attack phase the ponies could become extremely fast an aggressive, punishing players for making a mistake.

-The Pegasus (whos very obviously rainbow dash) make her ungodly fast when she sees you, give her sharp eye site, you could even make her purely a flying character. But put her on rooftops or other high areas (this includes clouds) jump from one to the other, searching for a target. A good detail would be to make her preform a sonic rain-boom when she sees you making it even more important to avoid her. Back to her placement, placing her in open streets with lots of areas to hide she'll search areas/specific grid zones. Hiding under wagons or trees breaking line of sight, don't have her be an instant "she sees she kills" but give her a sight meter/time so if you are in her LOS for too long 2 maybe 3 seconds the she launches too you, resulting in death.

-The Unicorns, give them magic. Instead of the just sending the same enemies after you have them use objects to stop/kill you, stay in their LOS for too long and they will lock you into a position in which you have to break free of via a quick time sequence or simply spamming "A" and "D" make them more of a 1 on 1 threat rather than on you can just run past, where players will actively seek to priority kill them, or heavily avoid them.

Add mini-bosses or harder variants of basic enemies, with the Pegasus being based, if not flat out rainbow dash you can base other enemies of of the main six/characters from the show.

there is potential in this idea and i look forward to seeing where this goes. I would make the early access free, and pull a base to the game as obviously its there, then once the game is complete charge for that as this felt more as a "Demo". I do apologize if any of this came across harsh as that was not the intent, best of luck with the development!

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"Rainbow Dash" could be a boss for the Pegasus (meaning the other Pegasus would need to be dumbed down so that she comes across as more unique/threatening.

"Fluttershy" can be implemented in nature segments have animals searching the area on the ground that will give your location away when seen, but unlike rainbow dash she stays more on the ground making her harder to avoid.

"Applejack" could be a blind brute strength monster, she plows through objects to get to you like a charger or tank from "Left For Dead" give her a sense of smell making her harder to avoid then basic earth ponies.

"Pinkie Pie" give her pinkie sense, she know when your close and things could happen based on her movements, example being if she has a twitchy tail, something falls from the sky above the player. Make her hyper active, zooming around trying to find the player.

"Rarity" when she spots the player all objects near her shatter and turn to needles, being sent at the player. Place her in an area in which you must destroy or steal from to escape, make her become more aggressive the messier the area becomes.

"Twilight" her action are more instant, than other unicorns. she could stick to the original idea of the unicorns, she calls all other ponies (max of like 5 to prevent the player being overwhelmed) over to the area to kill the player. Depending on which version of twilight (Alicornl or Unicorn) She could fly shooting beams of magic at the player.

ok and all, but need a way to rebind keys badly. as a handicapped player i cant rebind anything to play it comfortably.

This being the developer’s first and only project, for the price that it’s offered at, it’s absolutely a good start.

It’s missing some quality of life features — namely a Settings menu and the ability to make crouch a toggle since 90% of the game you’ll be in stealth — but once again, for a very first project, it’s got a solid start and shows some promise.

I’d love to see the developer work on the project more and can’t wait to see where it goes, it’s got a lot of potential