yiyre mom

So good. please make more.

These are great!

I really enjoyed these. Please keep creating!
You lay out your panels in a very professional manor, and this is very easy to read. If I had one criticism, I'd say it is in the writing. The tone and pacing feels slightly off, like a novice writer or the majority of fanfiction. The blushing rogue and romance in particular felt out of place.

ops I didnt see any comments loaded before I submited one ,sry,

I know you can just call me old school but now 2 major classes died just after the prologue ! I know ppl may not like Jori that much ( because that musk right? poor Dismas,judging by the story speed he must be torned apart now ) but lost a rooster on the first mission is tough and hard to achieve ( I never lost anyone before the first boss since my first run and I dont even use torch that much).....

3. How many parts are you planning for this? I hope there will be more than 10 episodes, XD

4. I read your other guids and figured that you are English as second language right? the english you showed here is really gd for an ESL indeed, just curious is that russian guides you were writting?

Oh, at last and most importantly Reynauld is Kleptomaniac!!!! (at least before he payed a visit to the nurse with strips )

lol, dont tell me Im the first one to leave comments, I should got some reward for this, no?
Just finish reading it, got few things puped up in my head

1. Why start part 2 a new page? U cant put this in the part 1 if u didnt tell me this link at my profile comments section, I may never find it out ! (and thanks for telling me)

2. wow, this story just got much faster and rated for R, so fast that I dont know if thats a gd thing or not... looks like all the relationships between the characters are developed just in one night which is a bit pushy for me (poor Jori, I never had her killed and never know she was a girl until 2 month later in the game, blame her musk right? XD )

I love these comics. Gotta make more of them!

Oh, Dismas. You just can't catch a break, can you?

This one was great too ! And thanks for the reply :)