The puzzles are mostly either blatantly obvious or convoluted. In general, the solution to a problem is a non sequitur, meaning clicking randomly usually works, or you need to look up the solution. The mediocre music and boring dialogue detracts from an otherwise beautiful presentation. The slow, railroaded movement hurts pacing significantly.

A stronger writer, and the ability to stop moving towards a zone if you change your mind, would be good changes.

The puzzles are mostly either blatantly obvious or convoluted. In general, the solution to a problem is a non sequitur, meaning clicking randomly usually works, or you need to look up the solution. The mediocre music and boring dialogue detracts from an otherwise beautiful presentation. The slow, railroaded movement hurts pacing significantly. A stronger writer, and the ability to stop moving towards a zone if you change your mind, would be good changes.