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The Mermaid of Zennor [Finished, reviewed]
my next ebi-hime's novel :happyheart:
Last edited by Мизантроп; 16 Dec, 2024 @ 5:34am
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aww I'm drowning in that water in the main menu :fallinlove: plus awesome music :steamthumbsup: so atmospheric :brfire:
--Lilac, 13yo MC in love with er elder brother (nnice first sentence, lol) no wasting time :D
--Morveren, mermaid
--Mathey, the man loved by the mermaid
--Jesse, 19yo brother ('A LOT' older than mc, lol :))
--Teagan, mc's dad's first deceased wife
--Fallon, T's mum
--Mrs Khoury, school counsellor
--Sohrab, her son
--Isla, Phoebe, Lucy & Megan, main bullies
--Aislinn, school friend
--Mr. Penrose, form teacher
--Mrs Lambert, English teacher
--Mr Basu, history teacher
--Skyler, J's girlfriend
--Heather, mc's mum
--Andy, their dad
Last edited by Мизантроп; 13 Dec, 2024 @ 8:35pm
Zennor, the village on the north coast of Cornwall, England
sounds like my village :kcgrumpy: I shuddered inwardly recollecting the years I lived there :neon_sad: and ppl even ask why I don't visit it anymore :annoyedema: uh-huh, esp in now in winter :winter2019surprisedyul:
I mean seriously it already feels like dread and creeping anxiety living in a tiny place where everyone know you and even more than you yourself know about your life :kcgrumpy: it's horrible :neon_sad:
gosh, I just really want to gaze at that moving water, get my usual motion sickness but this time embrace it, turn off my brain and .... :lunar2019piginablanket:
'close-minded back then' I'll be very surprised if it's changed, lol
London surprisingly turned out to be not that big as I used to think about capitals. I still remember how I laughed having walked to the 'biggest European square' which was so tiny, like 4 times smaller than in my city which is not that big. I guess everything is indeed perceived in comparison
can't she, dunno, not just wait passively for his call but message him? it's so much easier and more convenient, though I can imagine the appeal of hearing the voice of your beloved but at least smth than agonizing over his silence((
I wish the text were slightly bigger :neon_sad:
is it like 4th novel with that cloudy sky bg?)) I'm not complaining thou, very atmospheric and pretty :steamthumbsup:
Every time when I read about 'shabby clothes, matted and greasy hair' and then look at a very beautiful sprite I wonder :kccurious: is it like a distorted bullies' vision or... just a wrong art :( just for the sake of appealing visual. cause mc looks awesome, imho. I hope to see her brother later if he's said top be very handsome.
gosh it's terrible but the girl is so right :ooh: why do ppl aim for heart when throat is so easier to slice:lyonwink: i guess it just looks too gruesome for me :(
--has s a fluffy...
--you ate that once I gave you yesterday. one?
--'How little to do I mean to him?' & 'I just want to this to be over with.' no first 'to'?
--Leave it to you drink fancy-schmancy stuff like that. Is it correct?
--I do to have feelings.
--"I wouldn't say it if it wasn't," I reply." extra "
Last edited by Мизантроп; 15 Dec, 2024 @ 9:05pm
Мизантроп 12 Dec, 2024 @ 12:03pm 
"trying to puzzle my way through my own feelings" I like how it sounds :steamthumbsup: and I know the feeling :lunar2019piginablanket:
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