DEMO: https://eu.potato.tf:27020/demos/mvm_cinnabar_b3d_advanced_2-1677520018.zip

No strike

• This looks extremely bland, could use some details or wall geometry changes
  https://imgur.com/9RTryAS
  
  
• There are not a lot of cover to stand behind when protecting the hatch nor there aren't many packs to pick, add some cover and kits behind them
  https://imgur.com/B4c1r1N
  
  
• You could invert alpha on all grassy displacement so it would look more like a path bots/players are taking
  https://imgur.com/YlMIKle
  
  
• There's a little Z-Fighting here, should be an easy fix
  https://imgur.com/6TY0Yhb
  https://imgur.com/BxmgyWF
  
  
• This is a floor texture, it looks really weird on a wall, try replacing it with a texture named after _wall
  https://imgur.com/feh6R4c
  https://imgur.com/7I4uqwf
  
  
• That is an extremely powerful sightline for sniper that shouldn't be this big
  https://imgur.com/tJkPSHm
  
  
• These props are floating and just doesn't look that well when spammed, you should also no_build the surface on them as sentry buster can't reach it.
  https://imgur.com/eaXkeHN
  
  
• Misaligned textures
  https://imgur.com/PDSjQDc
  
  
• This plank is floating
  https://imgur.com/ABV6tei
  
  
• There's a little spot where you can see void
  https://imgur.com/RpWfQGK
  
  
• There should be barriers (fences), same as on the left so players wont fall down into a death pit trying to get a health kit, this area in general makes it extremely easy to reset bomb
  https://imgur.com/B9p9gxM
  
  
• Making crystals emit slight red light would look pretty, especially in this darker area, consider it
  https://imgur.com/9IrAaVy
  
  
• You could easily use some cliff props to make it look like a blocked cave which becomes unblocked upon the tank smashing into said blockade.
  https://imgur.com/TSDfMMo
  
  
• After all this drop down while it's cool in concept feels like it's just far too free especially when bots are taking the right hand route, means you can just feed without any penalty but respawn timers stacking based on consecutive deaths, not certain if I can even recall another map that has such a fast route to just outside of botyard. At the same time though other classes do take fall damage due to how high it is. Just feels like you can just continue to fling yourself at botwaves though due to this specifically.
  https://imgur.com/GHcQFIQ
  
  
• Would also be better for the second upper botspawn get moved to drop the bots somewhere else, never been a fan of a single main spawn exit and the alternative one seems to have a func push which drops bots around the same area as the main bot spawn. I just think spacing out areas where bot spawns is ideal as it means players have to cover more ground (see every botspawn besides Coaltown/Big Rock). Just turning down the func push itself may be enough to make this a non issue (alongside using the spawn more on a mission end).
  https://imgur.com/8cauhxP
  
  
• I would say this route needs more cover and it would be nice to see less exhaustive routes to take advantage of the highground. The bridge idea is fun and interesting but leaves a lot to be desired due to the scale giving players a long distance to walk before they can take advantage of either side.
  Of course in general as aforementioned there's a lot of sightlines too which the cover would help with, don't have any specific suggestions beyond us pointing out the problem spots such as that one barricade outside of botyard Snipers can stand on.
  https://imgur.com/DURHlIF
  
  
• these stairs, and all of them looking like those, dont really look good, you could make it either wooden ramp/plank or just wooden stairs
  https://imgur.com/S3RnWOH
  
  
• Clip this so players wont get blocked trying to get there
  https://imgur.com/npvq1x7
  
  
• It would be nice if this second spawn exit came out onto highground rather than just exiting onto the same floor as the hatch, it's already a longer walk than the faster alternative route which does give height advantage, and adding said height variation while making hatch holds stronger (unintended side effect of making the route worthwhile) would also help with the issue where people commented that hatch was too open.
  https://imgur.com/XGrIZ1o

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