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A short lesbian / yuri visual novel set in England. Our heroine, Toma Andrews, meets a ghost girl wearing an old-fashioned nightgown in a graveyard who calls herself Emmeline. Just who is she, and how did she die?

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埃米琳・伯恩斯的悲伤故事　　我的名字是托马·安德鲁斯，并且我是身份盗窃一个的受害者。　　毫无疑问，都是凯瑟琳阿姨的错。据妈妈说，大多数事情都是。　　在她们还�...

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25. mai 2020 kl. 1.32

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A few more wording issues...

So far I've found three. Ready? In the intro, there is a sentence that starts "Every weekend, without fail,". That paragraph continues "turn it a game" -- should be "turn it into a game", I think. After we meet Emily, Toma is thinking about Emily's dress. The sentence starts "That would explain" and goes on to "strange outfit she might as well". There should be either some punctuation, semicolon or em dash perhaps, after "outfit", or you should break the sentence there. And a usage hiccup. Emily says "I...